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Hail Goddess, radiant in the night,
It is I, your servant, come to hear your commands,
As it is decreed that on this night,
When you are dressed in blue,
You shall speak unto your servants
And unfold your mind to us.
I am listening, Goddess.
So now I wait,
Wait for you to answer me.
Ah! You have drawn back your veil of clouds!
Oh, beauteous lady!
Will you speak? Will you send visions?
But, alas, you are silent, fair cruelty.
I have ceased to understand you!
You, who so strictly demand an audience on these days,
Just so you can turn your head disdainfully away.
'Tis not kind, nor right to treat us like dirt,
When we strive so hard to undertake all you have sent us to do.
Are you really any better than a barroom hussy,
Dealing out snippets of pleasure only to slap us in the face twenty times in between?
Do you not remember my devotion?
Have I not crossed vast deserts, alone and almost to my death,
Just to find water from an oasis to pour onto a silver basin
For you to dip your light into?
Did my family not give up on me time and time again
As I followed your commands?
My wife seeking the solace of other men!
My children disowning me as a mad priest!
My grandchildren barred to me -
Oh, my chest, I cannot breathe!
I need to sit down, ooof.
Ah, ah, ah, I have not shouted and leapt around like that for a long time.
But you, you know, I have done your bidding,
Bad as it turned out for us to live with.
We went to war with the next island because you said you wanted it.
Couldn't you just have pulled the ocean over it and drowned the residents yourself?
Why kill half of our men just so we could spend the rest of our lives
Looking over our shoulders to see if they are coming to attack us again?
I don't understand you, no, I really don't.
You took my only son, then, did you know that?
My beautiful boy, my beautiful, beautiful boy.
Well, I hope you are taking good care of him,
Or else, when I get up there, I will make you pay!
Oh, Goddess, why? WHY!
See! You have made me cry now.
Do you know how many people have made me cry?
None!
But, now, oh, now, I cry tears of sadness, weariness and pain.
I am 86 years old, Goddess,
And still you expect me to climb this bloody mountain
Every time you are red or blue.
Do you know how many times that has been?
One hundred and twenty three times!
What have I been given for the last twelve, now thirteen, times I have come for you?
Silence, and now tears.
Tears that have brought me to my knees so that I curl up like a baby!
Well, I have had enough!
I am going to lie here and look at you until you talk to me.
Then I shall go home,
Forever.
It is I, your servant, come to hear your commands,
As it is decreed that on this night,
When you are dressed in blue,
You shall speak unto your servants
And unfold your mind to us.
I am listening, Goddess.
So now I wait,
Wait for you to answer me.
Ah! You have drawn back your veil of clouds!
Oh, beauteous lady!
Will you speak? Will you send visions?
But, alas, you are silent, fair cruelty.
I have ceased to understand you!
You, who so strictly demand an audience on these days,
Just so you can turn your head disdainfully away.
'Tis not kind, nor right to treat us like dirt,
When we strive so hard to undertake all you have sent us to do.
Are you really any better than a barroom hussy,
Dealing out snippets of pleasure only to slap us in the face twenty times in between?
Do you not remember my devotion?
Have I not crossed vast deserts, alone and almost to my death,
Just to find water from an oasis to pour onto a silver basin
For you to dip your light into?
Did my family not give up on me time and time again
As I followed your commands?
My wife seeking the solace of other men!
My children disowning me as a mad priest!
My grandchildren barred to me -
Oh, my chest, I cannot breathe!
I need to sit down, ooof.
Ah, ah, ah, I have not shouted and leapt around like that for a long time.
But you, you know, I have done your bidding,
Bad as it turned out for us to live with.
We went to war with the next island because you said you wanted it.
Couldn't you just have pulled the ocean over it and drowned the residents yourself?
Why kill half of our men just so we could spend the rest of our lives
Looking over our shoulders to see if they are coming to attack us again?
I don't understand you, no, I really don't.
You took my only son, then, did you know that?
My beautiful boy, my beautiful, beautiful boy.
Well, I hope you are taking good care of him,
Or else, when I get up there, I will make you pay!
Oh, Goddess, why? WHY!
See! You have made me cry now.
Do you know how many people have made me cry?
None!
But, now, oh, now, I cry tears of sadness, weariness and pain.
I am 86 years old, Goddess,
And still you expect me to climb this bloody mountain
Every time you are red or blue.
Do you know how many times that has been?
One hundred and twenty three times!
What have I been given for the last twelve, now thirteen, times I have come for you?
Silence, and now tears.
Tears that have brought me to my knees so that I curl up like a baby!
Well, I have had enough!
I am going to lie here and look at you until you talk to me.
Then I shall go home,
Forever.
Literature
Onwards!
Rough and puff, ain't looking so tough,
Moving still with an occasional cough,
Everyone have a dream but few are true,
Coz' they fear to tumble down like the way I do!
Literature
Nocte
Hiding from the beast,
From tree to tree,
Running in the dark,
I tell myself such things,
Slow- so it won't find you,
Breath.
These fires have scorched far and wide,
Leaving the scent of my former cinders to linger in my head,
Like some bad bender,
Warped memories encircling grey,
The ground is made of shattered glass,
Broken dreams.
No lilies remain,
To any kingdom I run,
In mirrors of liquid glass,
Surrealist battles are won,
And like fear,
The spider crawled from my mouth.
They are sedating everything,
Brush pixilated,
Focus changing,
Leaving me to run in the dark,
Caught in the eye of the storm,
Hiding in the calm.
Literature
The Force
“Use the force, Luke.”
Which one?
The one that propels starships through galaxies
At light speed?
The one derived from the fire in your
Sister’s eyes?
The one that lives in your heart, pumping
The blood through your veins?
Is this about vitality
Or hope?
Good versus evil; a perpetual battle
What side is the
High-speed train on?
What side are my cowardly downturned
Eyes on?
What side is rushing risky
Time on?
If there is something in the universe
That flows through us and
Makes true power inherent
Could it save me from that train?
Is this poem about death or courage?
I want there to be a force in my soul.
Maybe it
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A convincing portrait of an old man, who is both sympathetic and tragi-comic, in conversation with the moon goddess; and some nice detail about the nature of his unfamiliar religion thrown in. Compelling story. Beginning, middle, end. If you want to work on it, I'd suggest that the opening speech is a little too theatrical for a little too long, and I'd probably condense and heighten the theatricality to give a greater contrast to the more colloquial tone that breaks in. I also like the detail about his son, but I'd rather access the old man's sorrow by hearing the story of how his son was taken, than by simply see the old man break down.
Anyway, a very readable, entertaining poem, that definitely fulfils the prompt. Yay!
Anyway, a very readable, entertaining poem, that definitely fulfils the prompt. Yay!